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[ red_a02 ] Shuzhen – The first episode was a lot of fun, cos it had an interesting cocktail of sexual tension and smooth fight choreography. This episode is like the awkward aftermath...
27 Aquarius 13 18:13
[ vermilion_2 ] YAPX – I understand that most of your stories are dialogue-based and heavy on retorts and counter-retorts. This one felt unnecessarily circular. It starts with a cool premise: a killer/villain/vigilante uses Lent to swear off something that should be second nature to him (I suppose), and then talks about a story. The link between the two (giving up killing & the story) isn’t a 100% fit. Maybe instead of “let me tell you a story”, it could be “hey, you see I even passed a guy up for death today!” or equivalent. Something to drag Lorelei into the banter and the premise. // That’s my only complaint. I’m not a big fan of dialogue-based stories, but I can make a exception for this.
14 Aquarius 13 08:03
[ 130204 ] YAPX – Good pace, good characters, great dialogue. The thing I like best is a combination of the three: how you build up their pseudo-relationship through all that back-and-forth exchange. Somehow, you craft a unique, strange relationship: from any one point in the story, both of them are manipulative, victimised and hypocrites - though not all at once. // On word choices, I felt you could change the word “janitor” (“cleaner” or “uncle” would’ve given a different, but more acute local flavour to it). Mostly because, it’s connotes an added level of difference through: class. Whether or not you intended it, by portraying the “janitor” and “student” you bring out the fact that he’s stuck there socially in all sense of the word. It made the part where he says he reads books during weekends completely out-of-context and weird. // Also, there’s too much “sliding” in and out of the room. Not sure if that’s intentional repetition, or just a lack of other words. // I thought that the girl’s own background is pretty compelling. Even after everything, I can’t tell if she’s speaking the truth. Because I’m all for unreliable narrators and characters, I can still find her well-thought out. But other readers might lose patience or wonder at her sudden change of heart at the final moment.
04 Aquarius 13 08:48
So Fridae or People Like Us or some other gay rights group has declared August IndigNation Month, or something thus, with a whole lot of activities promoting the gay lifestyle.
I know what you’re thinking, because I thought the same thing – Who gives a shit? They can promote their lifestyle all they want, but it’s just mutual wanking, isn’t it? The only people who go to gay activities – I understand there’s going to be a small party, and a screening (?) showing (?) of gay art or something thus – are already gay. Like the only people who go to the theatre are theatre people, and the only people who go for gigs have bands of their own, and the only people who go to church are christians, and the bloggers convention, etc.
But this is not about losers who join a club to feel included (why do you think the KKK actually has members? clue: the uniforms, while tres cool, is only a sheet with holes in it). Okay, some people join clubs to pick up chicks/get picked up, that’s also not okay unless you’re doing it in church, with God’s eyes upon you.
Aside :: Since my friendster nick is G O D, some people actually think I’m one of those loser friendster interest groups. This idiot actually msg’d my ex to tell her “I think God is telling me that we should be friends.” I’m sure it has nothing to do with her pictures, and it really is God pointing his penis in her direction. You can look up my friendster profile, I just checked and there are only three of us. Gee space Ohh space Dee.
So now you’re thinking, “he’s gay bashing to prove his manhood”. Well, I’ve got news for you, the only thing that can possibly be more manly than me is if you take the Rock, gave him Connery’s larynx, and he was an astronaut before becoming a secret agent before becoming a film star before becoming the President of the US of A, all the while spending his nights as Batman. My manhood is rock solid.
With that cleared up, back to the gay-bashing. The reason they need to declare August IndigNation Month is because the government, in its infinite wisdom, has banned the regular Nation parties. Who the hell even knows about the Nation parties? That’s like banning radical Islamist preaching. Who gives a shit? Has any of us gone to a Nation party? Has any of us heard a radical Islamist preacher? Exactly.
Ah, but here comes the twist.
YOU HAVE TO GIVE A SHIT.
The government is right to ban gay promotion, just as it is right to ban Islamist promotion, just as it is right to redraw the electoral bountaries just before an election, and just as it should shut down AWARE and remove the franchise from women.
Every time these rights groups gain any damned thing, it’s at the expense of everyone else. Take abortion, the political mindfield of political mindfields (though not in Singapore), if the “pro-lifers” get their closed-minded view and ban abortion, that’d remove our right to kill unborn babies (which I always consider dumb, if they’re unborn, how can you kill them? If I write “It was a dark and stormy night.” and then delete it, have I just killed a Nobel-winning novel? They are just playing with your emotions by using “kill” and “baby” in the same breath.). If the pro-choice people get their closed-minded view and abortion is declared legal forever more, that’d remove our right to gossip about the hedonist hippie slut next door who got pregnant (ah, the good old days, when a man could stop people from doing the things they enjoy simply because he doesn’t enjoy doing those things).
What we have to do is keep power where it belongs, in the hands of the wealthy elite, just as God intented. Only by making sure that the wealthy stay wealthy can we have something to live for, since we could be wealthy once the Singapore Sweep actually strikes. What’s the point of winning the lottery if you have to be the same as everyone else? Exactly.
We’ll even have a casino soon, soon, so we don’t have to wait one whole month to find out if we’re a millionare, with all the heady power that entails.
It’s getting so that a man can’t have a gold tap in his personal bathroom without people complaining. We have to put a stop to this crap. In order to protect our interests from those fucking Chinese/Gay/Communist/Poor/Minority Group/Idealogues. Heck, if they need a rights group, then they’re obviously trying to take some rights from the rest of us.
Look at the NKF, if people are stupid enough to give them money, in spite of their blatant and offensive fund-raising tactics, they have a right to spend it however they please. It’s not fraud if you’re stupid. These losers are just making noise because they didn’t think of it first. We have to protect the rights of a company’s executives to make an honest living. He was getting paid peanuts for God’s sake, he should be paid more!
To put a stop to crap like this, I’ve come up with a Plan.
We shall set up an Anti-Rights group to keep our damn rights. Anyone can join, as long as they believe that don’t deserve special treatment because they’re unique like a shining star. Our group shall be called Standing Tall, Firm and United. We shall stand up and pledge ourselves as one united people, regardless of race, language or religion, to build a democratic society, based on justice and equality, so as to achieve happiness, prosperity and progress.
So if you’re gay/chink/whatever and don’t mind hanging out with other people who aren’t also gay/chink/whatever please apply. I know the idea of equality is hard to accept (like non-DenomiNational christians), but if you think about it, you might like it.
Yes, I know I’m elitist about being egalitarian. Yes, I know I blog about how blogs suck. I also pee about peeing, and many other things that seem contradictary to your small mind. Feel free to hate me and all I stand for.
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