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[ red_a02 ] Shuzhen – The first episode was a lot of fun, cos it had an interesting cocktail of sexual tension and smooth fight choreography. This episode is like the awkward aftermath...
27 Aquarius 13 18:13
[ vermilion_2 ] YAPX – I understand that most of your stories are dialogue-based and heavy on retorts and counter-retorts. This one felt unnecessarily circular. It starts with a cool premise: a killer/villain/vigilante uses Lent to swear off something that should be second nature to him (I suppose), and then talks about a story. The link between the two (giving up killing & the story) isn’t a 100% fit. Maybe instead of “let me tell you a story”, it could be “hey, you see I even passed a guy up for death today!” or equivalent. Something to drag Lorelei into the banter and the premise. // That’s my only complaint. I’m not a big fan of dialogue-based stories, but I can make a exception for this.
14 Aquarius 13 08:03
[ 130204 ] YAPX – Good pace, good characters, great dialogue. The thing I like best is a combination of the three: how you build up their pseudo-relationship through all that back-and-forth exchange. Somehow, you craft a unique, strange relationship: from any one point in the story, both of them are manipulative, victimised and hypocrites - though not all at once. // On word choices, I felt you could change the word “janitor” (“cleaner” or “uncle” would’ve given a different, but more acute local flavour to it). Mostly because, it’s connotes an added level of difference through: class. Whether or not you intended it, by portraying the “janitor” and “student” you bring out the fact that he’s stuck there socially in all sense of the word. It made the part where he says he reads books during weekends completely out-of-context and weird. // Also, there’s too much “sliding” in and out of the room. Not sure if that’s intentional repetition, or just a lack of other words. // I thought that the girl’s own background is pretty compelling. Even after everything, I can’t tell if she’s speaking the truth. Because I’m all for unreliable narrators and characters, I can still find her well-thought out. But other readers might lose patience or wonder at her sudden change of heart at the final moment.
04 Aquarius 13 08:48
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The Secret of Manliness ♠ 12 Ta♉rus 2k9, Tyr’s Day ♣ |  |
The Secret of Manliness
Abraham Lincoln, President of the United States
Conan the Cimmerian, King of Aquilona
Prince of Persia, Prince of Persia
The Lich King, King of Northrend, Lich
[pic missing]
Arthur Pendragon, Once and Future King
Thor Odinson, God
James Tiberius Kirk, Captain, USS Enterprise
Denny Crane, Founding Partner, Crane, Poole & Schmidt
Charles Xavier, Teacher
John Conner, Leader of the Resistance, Professional
I think by this point you get the idea.
What separates the men from the boys?
Armrests.
OMG OMG OMG
So, in searching for pics, I found this.
I was like, OMG, no way, etc. And put it down as another cool comic missed because back issues are such a bitch to source etc. But hark! What date upon yonder cover ehrm, breaks?
MAY 2009!
Is it out yet? Is it a single issue or a mini, and can someone (ahem, Piper) let me know when you see it? Is there a comic shop in town?
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Is there a line that I could write
Sad enough to make you cry?
All the lines you wrote to me were lies.
