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[ red_a02 ] Shuzhen – The first episode was a lot of fun, cos it had an interesting cocktail of sexual tension and smooth fight choreography. This episode is like the awkward aftermath...
27 Aquarius 13 18:13
[ vermilion_2 ] YAPX – I understand that most of your stories are dialogue-based and heavy on retorts and counter-retorts. This one felt unnecessarily circular. It starts with a cool premise: a killer/villain/vigilante uses Lent to swear off something that should be second nature to him (I suppose), and then talks about a story. The link between the two (giving up killing & the story) isn’t a 100% fit. Maybe instead of “let me tell you a story”, it could be “hey, you see I even passed a guy up for death today!” or equivalent. Something to drag Lorelei into the banter and the premise. // That’s my only complaint. I’m not a big fan of dialogue-based stories, but I can make a exception for this.
14 Aquarius 13 08:03
[ 130204 ] YAPX – Good pace, good characters, great dialogue. The thing I like best is a combination of the three: how you build up their pseudo-relationship through all that back-and-forth exchange. Somehow, you craft a unique, strange relationship: from any one point in the story, both of them are manipulative, victimised and hypocrites - though not all at once. // On word choices, I felt you could change the word “janitor” (“cleaner” or “uncle” would’ve given a different, but more acute local flavour to it). Mostly because, it’s connotes an added level of difference through: class. Whether or not you intended it, by portraying the “janitor” and “student” you bring out the fact that he’s stuck there socially in all sense of the word. It made the part where he says he reads books during weekends completely out-of-context and weird. // Also, there’s too much “sliding” in and out of the room. Not sure if that’s intentional repetition, or just a lack of other words. // I thought that the girl’s own background is pretty compelling. Even after everything, I can’t tell if she’s speaking the truth. Because I’m all for unreliable narrators and characters, I can still find her well-thought out. But other readers might lose patience or wonder at her sudden change of heart at the final moment.
04 Aquarius 13 08:48
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Twilight: A Character Guide ☾ 06 Le♌ 2k9, Thor’s Day ☽ |
As many of you know, I am a huge Twilight fan. As many of you have yet to jump on the Twilight bandwagon, I have decided to write a quick introduction to the many interesting and deeply-developed characters that populate the Twilightiverse, so that when you hang out with people much cooler than you are, you will be able to participate in their conversations.
Bella Swan
Isabella “Bella” Swan is a young girl recently moved into the town of Forks.
She used to be Bella Duckling, but has recently made the change (detailed in the Twilight Prequel, Crescent Waxing) to become the beautiful girl she now is.
She has a huge crush on Edward, but thinks that he hates her, because he wouldn’t look at her, much the same way no one else in Hogwarts would look at her, because she is DRAB and UNINTERESTING.
Also, she is a Muggle (a cross-bred Muppet and Fraggle).
Edward Cullen
Edward “Eddie” Cullen is an old man recently moved into the town of Forks.
Eddie is GOOD-LOOKING and MYSTERIOUS. Like everyone who lives in their parents’ basement, he is GOOD WITH COMPUTERS. He has a huge crush on Bella, and shows it – like everyone else who lives in their parents’ basement – by STALKING her.
Van Helsing
Prof. Abraham Van Helsing is a teacher at Hogwarts.
He is MYSTERIOUS, but no one cares because he is not GOOD-LOOKING. He will play a pivotal role in the climatic ending, where he finally gives his approval for their class to stage a MUSICAL.
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