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[ red_a02 ] Shuzhen – The first episode was a lot of fun, cos it had an interesting cocktail of sexual tension and smooth fight choreography. This episode is like the awkward aftermath...
27 Aquarius 13 18:13
[ vermilion_2 ] YAPX – I understand that most of your stories are dialogue-based and heavy on retorts and counter-retorts. This one felt unnecessarily circular. It starts with a cool premise: a killer/villain/vigilante uses Lent to swear off something that should be second nature to him (I suppose), and then talks about a story. The link between the two (giving up killing & the story) isn’t a 100% fit. Maybe instead of “let me tell you a story”, it could be “hey, you see I even passed a guy up for death today!” or equivalent. Something to drag Lorelei into the banter and the premise. // That’s my only complaint. I’m not a big fan of dialogue-based stories, but I can make a exception for this.
14 Aquarius 13 08:03
[ 130204 ] YAPX – Good pace, good characters, great dialogue. The thing I like best is a combination of the three: how you build up their pseudo-relationship through all that back-and-forth exchange. Somehow, you craft a unique, strange relationship: from any one point in the story, both of them are manipulative, victimised and hypocrites - though not all at once. // On word choices, I felt you could change the word “janitor” (“cleaner” or “uncle” would’ve given a different, but more acute local flavour to it). Mostly because, it’s connotes an added level of difference through: class. Whether or not you intended it, by portraying the “janitor” and “student” you bring out the fact that he’s stuck there socially in all sense of the word. It made the part where he says he reads books during weekends completely out-of-context and weird. // Also, there’s too much “sliding” in and out of the room. Not sure if that’s intentional repetition, or just a lack of other words. // I thought that the girl’s own background is pretty compelling. Even after everything, I can’t tell if she’s speaking the truth. Because I’m all for unreliable narrators and characters, I can still find her well-thought out. But other readers might lose patience or wonder at her sudden change of heart at the final moment.
04 Aquarius 13 08:48
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Xbox 360 Roogoo Achievements List ♠ 08 Le♌ 2k8, Frigg’s Day ♣ |  |
Roogoo
Xbox 360 Achievements List
♠ 5pts – One Track Mind – Only rotate in one direction for any 5 levels.
♠ 7pts – Meemoo Headache – Knock off 7 consecutive Meemoo on a platform.
♠ 10pts – Bonus Drop – Score perfect on any bonus stage.
♠ 10pts – ROO-Worthy – Unlock the first 10 levels.
♠ 10pts – Acc-ROO-acy – Score 100% accuracy on any 10 levels.
♠ 10pts – Meemoo Savvy – Don’t miss any shapes after the first Meemoo attack.
♠ 13pts – Comeback ROO – Win a multiplayer match with only one shape to lose remaining.
♠ 15pts – Tower of Moo – Beat par time on Tower of Moo (“Challenge” Intensity).
♠ 15pts – ROO-Race – Win a multiplayer match on “Bursting EX”.
♠ 20pts – Fly Butterfly – Score 100% accuracy on Fly Butterfly.
♠ 35pts – Bat Attack – Score 100% accuracy on Bat Attack.
♠ 50pts – Roogoo Guru – Achieve par time on all levels (“Challenge” Intensity).
More information on Roogoo (PC, Xbox 360).
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8:24-25 For we are saved by hope: but hope that is seen is not hope: for what a man seeth, why doth he yet hope for? But if we hope for that we see not, then do we with patience wait for it.
