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[ red_a02 ] Shuzhen – The first episode was a lot of fun, cos it had an interesting cocktail of sexual tension and smooth fight choreography. This episode is like the awkward aftermath...
27 Aquarius 13 18:13
[ vermilion_2 ] YAPX – I understand that most of your stories are dialogue-based and heavy on retorts and counter-retorts. This one felt unnecessarily circular. It starts with a cool premise: a killer/villain/vigilante uses Lent to swear off something that should be second nature to him (I suppose), and then talks about a story. The link between the two (giving up killing & the story) isn’t a 100% fit. Maybe instead of “let me tell you a story”, it could be “hey, you see I even passed a guy up for death today!” or equivalent. Something to drag Lorelei into the banter and the premise. // That’s my only complaint. I’m not a big fan of dialogue-based stories, but I can make a exception for this.
14 Aquarius 13 08:03
[ 130204 ] YAPX – Good pace, good characters, great dialogue. The thing I like best is a combination of the three: how you build up their pseudo-relationship through all that back-and-forth exchange. Somehow, you craft a unique, strange relationship: from any one point in the story, both of them are manipulative, victimised and hypocrites - though not all at once. // On word choices, I felt you could change the word “janitor” (“cleaner” or “uncle” would’ve given a different, but more acute local flavour to it). Mostly because, it’s connotes an added level of difference through: class. Whether or not you intended it, by portraying the “janitor” and “student” you bring out the fact that he’s stuck there socially in all sense of the word. It made the part where he says he reads books during weekends completely out-of-context and weird. // Also, there’s too much “sliding” in and out of the room. Not sure if that’s intentional repetition, or just a lack of other words. // I thought that the girl’s own background is pretty compelling. Even after everything, I can’t tell if she’s speaking the truth. Because I’m all for unreliable narrators and characters, I can still find her well-thought out. But other readers might lose patience or wonder at her sudden change of heart at the final moment.
04 Aquarius 13 08:48
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– 06 Ta♉rus 13, Moon’s Day [ canon ]
♥ Magic Bunny
– 06 Vi♍o 12, Thor’s Day [ lantern ]
♥ Shot – You Can See It In Their Eyes
– 06 Le♌ 12, Moon’s Day [ shot ]
♥ Witch-Girl / Tempest Eyes (9/23) – Worry Too Much
– 06 Aqu♒rius 12, Moon’s Day [ witch-girl ]
♥ Witch-Girl – Anniversaries
– 06 Lib♎a 11, Thor’s Day [ witch-girl ]
♥ poem – Red: Friends in High Places
– 06 Le♌ 11, Saturn’s Day [ eden poetry ]
♥ short story – Red V: The Colour of Her Concerns
– 06 Lib♎a 10, Woden’s Day [ canon ]
♥ short story – Red IV: The Colour of Her Constrains
– 06 Vi♍o 10, Moon’s Day [ canon ]
♥ To Aru Kagaku no Railgun
– 06 Ge♊ini 10, Sun Lord’s Day [ VDOs awesome music playlist entertainment anime J.C.Staff Misaka Mikoto To Aru Kagaku no Railgun To Aru Majutsu no Index ]
♥ Colonisation
– 06 Sco♏pio 2k9, Frigg’s Day [ gaming PC Sid Meier Civilization Civ4 Colonization Age of Empires Total War Empire: Total War ]
♥ Mission Statement
– 06 Lib♎a 2k9, Tyr’s Day [ The ♥ Corps ]
♥ Twilight: A Character Guide
– 06 Le♌ 2k9, Thor’s Day [ gaming entertainment movies vampires ]
♥ Like, Wow
– 06 Ta♉rus 2k9, Woden’s Day [ VDOs awesome viral ]
♥ Eternal Life
– 06 Ta♉rus 2k9, Woden’s Day [ religion politics gay rites homosexuals ]
♥ East Coast / West Wing
– 06 A♈ies 2k9, Moon’s Day [ VDOs singapore ping.sg blogging internet social media ]
♥ Living in Sin – CrimeWatch
– 06 Pi♓es 2k9, Frigg’s Day [ singapore ]
♥ Living in Sin – This is My Church II
– 06 Aqu♒rius 2k9, Frigg’s Day [ singapore blogging internet social media politics ]
♥ Society’s Decline
– 06 Cap♑corn 2k9, Tyr’s Day [ nipples textual frustration entertainment movies ]
♥ Loose Ends II
– 06 Sagi♐arius 2k8, Saturn’s Day [ politics free speech verses entertainment celebrities Miley Cyrus Vanity Fair Annie Leibovitz ]
♥ The Straits Times for Free Speech
– 06 Lib♎a 2k8, Moon’s Day [ free speech ]
♥ SPORE – Archetypes and Superweapons
– 06 Lib♎a 2k8, Moon’s Day [ gaming PC Mac SPORE Will Wright Guide ]
♥ Comment Policy
– 06 Le♌ 2k8, Woden’s Day [ bears ]
♥ jills – The NGAH Factor
– 06 Le♌ 2k8, Woden’s Day [ jills ]
♥ I Like This Post – I Like This Post – Last Writes: Ping.sg In-Crowd
– 06 Can♋er 2k8, Sun Lord’s Day [ blogging ping.sg daphnemaia ]
♥ Guitar Hero III System Requirements
– 06 Ge♊ini 2k8, Frigg’s Day [ gaming PC Mac Xbox 360 PS3 Guitar Hero Guitar Hero III Guitar Hero 3 ]
♥ Legends of Rock
– 06 Ge♊ini 2k8, Frigg’s Day [ gaming PC Mac Xbox 360 PS3 Guitar Hero Guitar Hero III Guitar Hero 3 Rock ]
♥ Podcasting and Social Media
– 06 Ta♉rus 2k8, Tyr’s Day [ blogging internet social media ]
♥ is Twittering Does “micro-blogging” mean this is a “macro-blog”?
– 06 A♈ies 2k8, Sun Lord’s Day [ textual frustration blogging internet social media Twitter ]
♥ Living in Sin – Home Team Scores a Goal! Shoots Dead Murderer at Outram MRT
– 06 Pi♓es 2k8, Thor’s Day [ singapore ]
♥ When Websites Attack
– 06 Pi♓es 2k8, Thor’s Day
♥ Ping v1.80, adult-orientation and, oh yes, nudity naked sex pictures (NSFW)
– 06 Aqu♒rius 2k8, Woden’s Day [ celebrities ]
♥ motto cade
– 06 Can♋er 2k4, Tyr’s Day
♥ love is suicide, inside out
– 06 Ta♉rus 2k4, Thor’s Day [ eden poetry venus ]
♥ Roe v. Wade
– 06 A♈ies 2k4, Tyr’s Day [ verses ]
♥ meet nocturne day ii
– 06 Le♌ 2k3, Woden’s Day [ fatality ]
♥ Day For – Towards the Dawn
– 06 Ge♊ini 2k2, Thor’s Day [ 地earth ]
♥ Does Black & White Live Up to the Hype?
– 06 Ge♊ini 01 [ gaming PC eden article Peter Molyneux ]
♥ Midnight in the Garden
– 06 Ta♉rus 01 14:00 [ splash ]
♥ Midnight in the Garden, Ash, Part II
– 06 Ta♉rus 01 [ eden poetry ]
♥ Ash
– 06 Sco♏pio 2k [ eden poetry ]
♥ Home Sweet Homepage
– 06 10 99 [ eden article ]
♥ Ghost – Love : Sonnet 12
– 06 Ge♊ini 99 [ eden poetry ]
♥ short story – To the End of the World
– 06 Ge♊ini 99 [ eden short story ]
♥ It Could Have Been Me
– 06 02 99 09:09
♥ That Net Thing
– 10 09 95 06:03 [ verses ]
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“It’s as I said before,” she whispered. “You aren’t afraid of anything, are you?”
“What does it matter if I am or not ?” I shrugged. I took her arm and drew her to the passage.
“We are the things that others fear,” I said. “Remember that.”
